"Elon Musk kind of turned out to be an asshole and I don't want to be driving a car built and designed by an asshole. So, uh, looking forward to my new ride."
      • TallonMetroid@lemmy.worldEnglish
        10·
        1 month ago

        “Senator Elon Musk” is ambiguous phrasing. Obviously, what is meant is “Senator [that] Elon Musk”, but it could also have been calling Aparthiedman himself a senator.

        • Mr_Dr_Oink@lemmy.world
          2·
          1 month ago

          It reads like a gardenpath sentence.

          For example (made up on the spot so excuse me if its crap)

          Muscle man made harms others when using force

          [Muscle that was made by man]

      • xmunk@sh.itjust.works
        10·
        1 month ago

        Elon Musk isn’t a Senator. The title as written reads that way by default.

        A that shoved in the middle would fix that.

      • Darkassassin07@lemmy.caEnglish
        5·
        1 month ago

        Senator Elon Musk Called a ‘Traitor’ Gets Rid of His Tesla: Don’t Want a Car Built By An ‘A**hole’

        This sounds like Elon is a Senator and was called a traitor; when it was actually Musk calling a Senator a traitor.

        Try:

        Senator, who was called a ‘Traitor’ by Elon Musk, Gets Rid of His Tesla: Don’t Want a Car Built By An ‘A**hole’