• TallonMetroid@lemmy.world
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        18 days ago

        “Senator Elon Musk” is ambiguous phrasing. Obviously, what is meant is “Senator [that] Elon Musk”, but it could also have been calling Aparthiedman himself a senator.

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          18 days ago

          It reads like a gardenpath sentence.

          For example (made up on the spot so excuse me if its crap)

          Muscle man made harms others when using force

          [Muscle that was made by man]

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        18 days ago

        Elon Musk isn’t a Senator. The title as written reads that way by default.

        A that shoved in the middle would fix that.

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        Senator Elon Musk Called a ‘Traitor’ Gets Rid of His Tesla: Don’t Want a Car Built By An ‘A**hole’

        This sounds like Elon is a Senator and was called a traitor; when it was actually Musk calling a Senator a traitor.

        Try:

        Senator, who was called a ‘Traitor’ by Elon Musk, Gets Rid of His Tesla: Don’t Want a Car Built By An ‘A**hole’